Monday, December 30, 2019
The Right to an Education
For this activity, I have to write a short story. The story can be about anything that I wish so I choose to write it about a surfer and the perfect view hope you like it!!!
I sit on the scorching yellow sugar with my ancient like towel. The blue liquid in front of me is so astonishing but also so deadly. I feel like if I go I might not ever want to come back. It so peaceful were I lay dreaming about the possibility of what could happen if I touched the liquid. The crash of the waves makes me shiver with excitement. I grab the board next to me and race to the liquid not knowing what will happen next. The majestic water shimmers off the gold slow falling speck in the sky.
There it is the perfect wave. As the wave approaches me my hands start to rattle with fear, all of these thoughts come to my mind like, “what will happen if I miss it, or what will happen if I don’t catch it right”. There was no time to think about that too much, The wave was right behind me.
I hesitate as I turn around, as the wave lifts me up my stomach starts to drop and my heart starts racing. With concern I push myself up, when I drop the wave topples over the top of me. The beautiful view in front of me is so overwhelming and so splendid. I arrive at the end of the wave, and the feeling inside of me is so phenomenal that I just sit on my board to cherish the marvellous and superb view. Ever since then I have always visited that beach.
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Kia ora Zhynaliyah,
ReplyDeleteWow! This piece of writing is so well written. You are very talented, Zhynaliyah! You have done an incredible job explaining both the surroundings and the emotions involved in the story, which makes it very easy for the reader to feel involved in the story.
Is this story from your perspective, are you a surfer? I've always wanted to get into surfing. I still hope to one day! From the way you've described catching a wave, I want to try even more!
You are a great writer, I hope you keep it up!
Ngā mihi,
Tayla